The Deal Part Three

Part 3 of my "The Deal" story. Is this the end for poor Jake? Can he regain some sort of control over his life ever again? Has Kenneth gone too far too fast? 
I'll let you decide.





 

12 comments:

  1. I think Ken should go a little bit further :)

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  2. Parts 1 and 2 were great. Really shit your pants on part 3 though huh?

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    1. Lol. Okay I guess. Thanks for all your support of this FREE content I give you weekly. There are tons of other places you can go if you don't like my work. We'll survive without you.

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    2. Just like the whole captioning world would survive without you making this kind of shitty caption.

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    4. If you want, you can always make a nice donation and I'll write you a better story line. Buuuuut I'm sure you're just a lurker looking for free things to jerk off too. Anyway, take care.

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  3. He was so beautiful before the hospital stay. I guess I prefer cute GFE over Bimbo.

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  4. How about starting from Barbie's perspective and ending with Jake being brought back one last time before being sent for good

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  5. She looked so cute until the hospital. Shame :( guess I'm not a bimbo fan myself.

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  6. He should definitely get stuck as that sexy bimbo!

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